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any one wana read my poems

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hi thank you for looking on this iv just wrote a new poem and i was wondering if you would mind telling me what you think of it!

you 

you made me believe

you make me grieve

you make me cry

i wanted to die

you brought me hope

you brought me life

now all you bring is the touch of a knife

my blood it runs as deep as the sea

what kept it pouring

the lies you told me

my hand it shakes knife to flesh

cant believe im such a mess

so this is what you bring the

need to be dead

as my blood it runs deep dark n red

so what do think of it? there a story behind it about me ex

thanks for reading this

bye

dark angle xx

Welcome to the forum, and thanks for th poem.  We actually have an entire thread devoted to poetry and short stories, under the Literature heading.  I'm sure we'd all love to see more from you.  I tend to be a harsh critic (my own work included), so I'll reserve any comments for now,  thank you for the effort, and encourage you to continue. ;D

Swoopguy

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