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Public: Anyone can view. hi thank you for looking on this iv just wrote a new poem and i was wondering if you would mind telling me what you think of it!
you
you made me believe
you make me grieve
you make me cry
i wanted to die
you brought me hope
you brought me life
now all you bring is the touch of a knife
my blood it runs as deep as the sea
what kept it pouring
the lies you told me
my hand it shakes knife to flesh
cant believe im such a mess
so this is what you bring the
need to be dead
as my blood it runs deep dark n red
so what do think of it? there a story behind it about me ex
thanks for reading this
bye
dark angle xx
Welcome to the forum, and thanks for th poem. We actually have an entire thread devoted to poetry and short stories, under the Literature heading. I'm sure we'd all love to see more from you. I tend to be a harsh critic (my own work included), so I'll reserve any comments for now, thank you for the effort, and encourage you to continue. ;D
Swoopguy
