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goodbye i utter

not knowing if you heard me

knowing

you dont desevre me

my wounds become become red rore

as i watch u walk out the door

its over

Spelling errors:

Line 4:  desevre - deserve

Line 6: u - you

Also, in line 5 did you mean to write become twice?  And what does rore mean?